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25 Nov

chuck wendig’s Flash Fiction Challenge: 200 words of a story.

http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2013/11/22/flash-fiction-challenge-200-words-at-a-time-part-one/

So here we go…

Jacob  stood alone on the fog covered dock. A spectral figure wreathed in frost and ice crystal.
The glock hung loosely at his side with the apathy of sleep deprivation.

A beam of light lanced through the fog and somewhere far off a fog horn belched.

He waited.

His fingers were numb on the grip and his exposed skin was cold and clammy.

He waited some more.

Then he heard it, the slow stutter of hooves clacked across the dock; Each step loud and surreal in the opaque air.

CLACK-CLACK.

He shivered.

Jacob told himself it was only the chill of the fog, but he knew better.

He saw the eyes first.

Red as rage and hot as a furnace.

One step after another.

CLACK-CLACK.

He ran his tongue over his ragged lips and croaked out a greeting.

“h-here.”

His voice sounded like a lost child.

Afraid, alone and desperately wanting to be elsewhere.

The terrible eyes moved forward in their unrelenting pace.

CLACK-CLACK.

It ripped through the fog, its two cloven hooves leaving a scorch marked trail.

His teeth chattered .

It came to a sudden halt, its black armor clanking like a death toll.

It gave a serrated grin.

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Posted by on November 25, 2013 in Flash Fiction Challenges

 

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4 responses to “Back to the font

  1. boydstun215

    December 5, 2013 at 5:21 pm

    Hi rrcross:
    Just wanted to say thanks for the great opening 200 words. I’ve added the next 200 words and am hoping someone continues the story.

    Here’s the link to my addition in case you’re interested: http://jeremiahboydstun.com/2013/12/06/another-200-words-12613/

    Cheers!

     

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